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| Easter decorations in Prague Old Town Square |
I got back from a fortnight in the Czech Republic on
Thursday and after a whole weekend of what feels like solid sleep, I’m ready to
get back to work.
I was quiet on my blog in the weeks running up to my holiday
because I heard back from HMB with another set of revisions. So after much
hair-tearing I buried myself in those and cut back the amount of time I spent
on social media. I finished and sent back the revised manuscript a couple of
days before my holiday so now I’m back to the jumpy, nail-biting wait!
Of course, the best way to keep my mind off the wait is to
get on with the next story, so starting tomorrow it’s back to the WIP. It’s
been on hold for nearly two months now, so the first thing to do is read it
through. I’ve come up with things to look out for, gleaned from the points that
have come out in the revision process for TWKS. They are (in no particular
order):
- Does the progression of the romance take centre-stage at all times, or are there places where it gets buried under the action?
- In each scene, is it clear how the hero and heroine feel about each other and is their behaviour consistent with these feelings/conflicts?
- Do the hero and heroine each have a clear and consistent emotional arc throughout the story?
- Are there places where introspection could be replaced by the hero and heroine interacting?
Hopefully now I’m more aware of my areas of weakness I won’t
repeat the same mistakes again. I also hope I won’t make any new ones!
